Oh so sexy. I want her booty

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wow! that's great... i dig the colors!

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ahh the body shape <3

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I still love your art!

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Her lips look like bubble gum. yum yum <3 This makes me happy and reminds me of Lisa Frank.

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<sup>I like the varying line width you've used, some people don't realize the benefit of being a bit freer with one's line work.

A few things struck me as odd-looking here: firstly, her mouth, because it looks like a mix between a normal set of lips and a more animal-like muzzle which is wider, and it seems to make her mouth and lips look unusually large. This might've been intentional, I can't know; it was just the pinkness that was insinuating them to be more like human lips than a muzzle that made me do a bit of a double-take.

Other than that, there seems to be a lack of foreshortening of her (stage) right arm and leg. The arm would appear fine if perhaps her hand had been made smaller and the lower arm lengthened slightly, as if to appear at more of a slant behind her. If the lower half of the leg has the correct perspective, then the leg could benefit from being angled slightly more vertical. If the upper leg has the desired perspective, then the lower part could benefit from being more horizontal. Also, I wasn't sure if her tail poof was actual size, or was meant to be closer to the viewer? If so, some heavier inking would have brought that out more. If not, don't mind me, lol.

I like the color choice in some places, such as the shirt and body, but it would have been nice to see that sort mixing of hues in all of the parts. The board she's holding feels the most different and doesn't fit with the rest of the coloring style much at all. Also, the character itself feels a little off-center towards the left which is a bit distracting.

Overall, great use of simplified, expressive lines to portray everything. You have a noticeable light source, but it'd be nice to see more done with the colors as far as variety in hue throughout the whole piece. I'm always a fan of vertical composition, and you used great color choices for the background. While I can see the need for something else to fill the space, the sparklies don't seem to quite match the integrity of the rest of the piece. Although your comment does make them easier to accept, lol.</sup>

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Wow what a huge critique XD anyhoo, I love it *C <3 thanks so much for drawing her <3 it brings back fond memories <3 the colouring is HOT

I like the varying line width you've used, some people don't realize the benefit of being a bit freer with one's line work.

A few things struck me as odd-looking here: firstly, her mouth, because it looks like a mix between a normal set of lips and a more animal-like muzzle which is wider, and it seems to make her mouth and lips look unusually large. This might've been intentional, I can't know; it was just the pinkness that was insinuating them to be more like human lips than a muzzle that made me do a bit of a double-take.

Other than that, there seems to be a lack of foreshortening of her (stage) right arm and leg. The arm would appear fine if perhaps her hand had been made smaller and the lower arm lengthened slightly, as if to appear at more of a slant behind her. If the lower half of the leg has the correct perspective, then the leg could benefit from being angled slightly more vertical. If the upper leg has the desired perspective, then the lower part could benefit from being more horizontal. Also, I wasn't sure if her tail poof was actual size, or was meant to be closer to the viewer? If so, some heavier inking would have brought that out more. If not, don't mind me, lol.

I like the color choice in some places, such as the shirt and body, but it would have been nice to see that sort mixing of hues in all of the parts. The board she's holding feels the most different and doesn't fit with the rest of the coloring style much at all. Also, the character itself feels a little off-center towards the left which is a bit distracting.

Overall, great use of simplified, expressive lines to portray everything. You have a noticeable light source, but it'd be nice to see more done with the colors as far as variety in hue throughout the whole piece. I'm always a fan of vertical composition, and you used great color choices for the background. While I can see the need for something else to fill the space, the sparklies don't seem to quite match the integrity of the rest of the piece. Then i thought "Nah forget it, YO HOMES TO BEL-AIR!"

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I love her anatomy. I like the painterly colouring, it adds texture to the picture.

I'm going to hell? ;__;

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